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Post by Dr. Facilier on Jun 15, 2011 21:51:41 GMT -5
Hey! I love fanfic writing and I got some rules on what I do so you know
Requests: All are more than happy to come whether it's related to here or not I'm open but it could take some time and effort so please wait and if you don't like what I wrote sorry it's what I tried
Flaming: I do not tolerate abuse on my fanfic don't like don't read. Simple critical opinion is fine but abuse un uh.
Ideas: I have plenty of them and I may write them first but your request will be done and my ideas are the same as the requests I take.
One last thing: Have fun! Enjoy reading....... Are you ready?
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Post by Franny Robinson on Jun 20, 2011 21:00:28 GMT -5
Inspiration came from Billie's lovely fanfic request she made for me. It's a sequal to the wendy/facilier thing later I'm making a Eris/Facilier one yes that one was inspired by the request as well don't judge me ======== The deal is set Wendy came into Facilier's room and proceeded to knock on it when a deep smooth voice replied making wendy jump "Come on in dollface no need to knock" Wendy in fact did enter and she asked "Uh hello Dr. may I take a seat?" Facilier grinned widely and replied "Sure hun come and sit where are a gentlemen's manners?" Wendy pretended to cough and then spoke slowly "About that offer you made last night?" Facilier closed his eyes and nodded. Oh she was getting it this was too good to be true. 'Don't cut off the act' Facilier thought to himself as he said pretending to remember only a little "Yes cherie go on?" "I'd like to accept it" Wendy's voice replied and it was like music to facilier's ears. Oh she was now his all but one thing standing in his way. The shake. He always had to do that part. Wendy before he could asked "What's the price though sir? I will do it but what for exactly?" Facilier pondered pretending to think then replying back "You simply have to be my apprentice simple as that. No big deal really" Well that wasn't all true. He also had custody of wendy's soul but he wouldn't tell her that. It'd ruin everything. Wendy nodded satisfied with the answer and facilier held out his hand and said to the girl tempting her further "So we got ourselves a deal ma cherie?" Wendy gave a kind and naive smile and shook his hand When she shook his hand facilier grinned like a madman and instantly got a potion and put it in a glass and handed it to wendy. Confused Wendy asked "What is this?" Facilier replied "just drink that and you'll get what I promised you" Wendy knowing that this may be her answer drunk the potion. At first she felt nothing but then she began to have her heart beating immensely and she felt something tell her to sleep. She somehow felt so tired and excited at the same time and blackness clouded her vision then nothing she saw anymore. A few hours later she woke up in her room and Facilier was there grinning again like a madman and wendy screamed and asked fearful "What happened?! What did you do?!" Facilier simply replied "I got you that control you wanted. It just needed to get used to y'alls body now you can dream whenever YOU want to" Wendy then proceeded to ask another question but facilier put his hat on and replied "See y'all tomorrow Ms. Darling" With that he left and wendy was left speechless and yet somewhat grateful even though she had so many questions on her mind
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Post by Franny Robinson on Jun 20, 2011 22:18:36 GMT -5
Ok eris/facilier warning lots of fluffyness. My title is lame thanks for seeing it oh and this takes like an hour after that fic ^ ====== Dark Romance
Eris was simply staring at Facilier in a crystal ball and she remarked to herself "I must admit the boy's got class. That girl's gonna be his for sure" Eris then made a hff of content of the beginning of chaos insuring. So to enjoy herself plus being interested in the man she disappeared to find him and get information out of him. Eris wisked her way from the doorooms and then to facilier's bedroom. Eris then knocked on the door and a deep voice said "Hold on! Give me a minute!" A dark chuckle came to eris when she went to the opened door and facilier checked the door to firgure out who it was "Hello? Umm this ain't funny seriously hello?.......... Damn students must be that peter parker brat"
"Correction Dr. it's just little me" Eris's voice replied smoothly but not as smooth as facilier's. Facilier's face was not facing eris' but he turned his frown of shock into a grin of evil content and he turned to face her and replied cooly "Well hello there Eris. Simply a pleasure to have y'all in here" Eris was planning to touch his shoulder to weaken him but for now that wasn't the time she simply purred back "The feeling is quite mutual Dr. So I saw you with that Darling girl" Facilier shrugged and replied "Yeah she's mine now. Maybe Wilbur too but he hasn't decided" He stopped to make a sadistic grin then he finished "Yet" Eris chuckled and said "I must admit you're quite charming" Facilier tugged his tailcoat front proudly and replied "Thank you miss you're charming yourself"
Eris smiled and now she felt it the right time to weaken and seduce Facilier. So she put a calm touch on his shoulder and she could feel his powers and some of his thoughts wash into her. Facilier on the other hand felt weaker and more dependant strangely and he knew it was eris but he allowed her to do such. For some reason he liked it. Eris meanwhile then lowered her voice seducively and asked "So you do magic correct?" Facilier shook his head slightly and replied just as calm as ever "Yes mam I do. Lots of it too. So those kids don't mess with me" Eris then put a hand on facilier's face and facilier just grinned and eris spoke again "Can you do me a specific favor. Since you impressed me with your work on Wendy can you do the same for Rapunzel?" Facilier blinked his eyes and felt them getting heavier but he kept his voice awake "Certainly. I can do that. She's a lame leader anyway"
Eris then waited for the final part of her seduction and her personal amusement and liking toward the man. She whispered to him in a even more seductive tone "Would you also make her my personal quest on my conquest? And would you come by to see it yourself?" Facilier just breathed deeply and nodded too charmed by the woman to speak. Facilier tryed to not let himself loose his cool but she was so damn suave. Facilier turned to the woman in front of him now and he said weakly but calmly "I can certainly do that. Sounds like a real party"
With that Eris held both sides of Facilier's face and Facilier catching on quite quickly pulled her in and they both kissed
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Post by Chase Young on Jun 20, 2011 22:33:38 GMT -5
omg! major fluffyness! you got Eris's personalty spot on! its amazing!!! I love the title, makes me think of Lady Gaga's bad romance XD
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Post by Franny Robinson on Jun 21, 2011 5:08:01 GMT -5
lol yes I warned you of the fluffyness and I do remember watching Sinbad but I don't know where that movie is exactly but that's what I remember Eris being like. Thanks!
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Master Splinter
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Post by Master Splinter on Jun 22, 2011 22:28:30 GMT -5
I'm a weirdo thanks for noticing ROFL. OK this is just a whatif meeting for facilier and splinter. I know I'm a wussie and a weirdo thank you ============ Who's mind is better? Facilier's cane clicked on the floor as he walked down the hallway to his dorm. He was exausted this particular day but still wanted at least some amusement so to think on what to do he leaned near a wall twirling a card in his hand. Two voices were heard as he leaned on the wall one was of a man deep but with wisdom as if he was older than facilier and one was of rapunzel. He leaned slightly forward but kept his face away as he twirled the card again. "So this is your room Splinter" Rapunzel's voice came and the other voice simply replied "Thank you miss rapunzel" Rapunzel smiled "Anytime need me for anything just call" Splinter replied gladly if not slightly confused "What is your phone number miss rapunzel" Rapunzel then laughed and replied "No I mean if you need me let me know that's all" Splinter nodded and rapunzel left and facilier came to look and it took all of his will to not laugh. Splinter was a giant RAT! A greyfurred brownrobed rat! This was too funny! Still he seemed strange so facilier walked to the closed door and knocked on it then when splinter opened it facilier remarked "Hey y'all are the new guy eh?" Splinter looked at facilier with one look and facilier felt his mind being read.... this rat was a pyshic! Facilier couldn't help he snorted and replied "So you the silent type?" Splinter narrowed his eyes and replied sternly "First of all yes sir I am the new teacher and secondly no I speak besides action speaks louder then words. You are Dr. Facilier?" Facilier replied amused with this rat "Yep. That's me don't wear it out so can I come in or--" "Yes come in sir" Splinter then left room for facilier to get in and he did so and splinter closed the door. "I know who y'all are already bud" Splinter narrowed his eyes deeply now and replied back "Very well but do not call me that call me Splinter please" Facilier shrugged "Sure. Wanna have a fortune told? I'm not doin' anythin'" Splinter nodded still untrusting of this man "Of course. I do not mind but please do not make this extremely long" Facilier just sat near the table splinter had and splinter sat himself and facilier took a deck of cards and replied smoothly "Pick three" Splinter did so and facilier chuckled and spoke seriously "Oooh y'all had a owner that y'all loved a lot before some metalhead guy killed him off. You then saw a truck accident and you went to the sewers to get away but found four turtles and you helped them and got that goo they were covered in on yourself hence why y'all are a mutant. Y'all had tons of problems with that metal guy but you defeated him easily" Splinter widened his eyes in worry this man knew him pretty good. Facilier took the second card "Ah y'all raised you're kids to teens now and one of them was nearing death before you stopped the guy by your powers y'all learned them and you're working here as the teacher for zoology" The third one was the future "Oh fantastic! Y'all are gonna be a fantastic minduser and your sons will be safe forever" Splinter smiled at the thought of his four sons. He'd give the whole world for them and facilier spoke about them with a hint of respect. Facilier continued "Show me y'all powers brother" Splinter confused asked "What do you mean?" Facilier grinned he wanted to get amusement and he was getting it. If splinter was powerful enough to control HIM then facilier would find a way to get splinter on his side "I said use your powers on me" Splinter shook his head and facilier replied "C'mon I dare ya what's wrong afraid?" Splinter narrowed his eyes and frowned deeply "Very well but only because you need me to" Splinter then proceeded to stare at facilier and facilier's grin lowered and replaced with a calm blank look and his eyes became red instead of purple. Splinter sighed and his eyes were red as well and splinter said as if to ask a question "Hmm go to your own room I suppose" Without a word facilier left the room. After a teeny bit of waiting splinter saw that facilier was in his room and he said relieved and annoyedlike "I release you but never ask me to do this for entertainment Dr." Facilier shook his head back at his dorm and he laughed "My God his powers are raw as red meat. He's perfect! He'll be great for my friends and my plan for rapunzel! He'll join me and when he does he'll make me unstoppable!" Facilier laughed evily and poor splinter was asleep not knowing what he got himself into.
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Post by Rapunzel on Jun 23, 2011 8:54:26 GMT -5
OMK I MUST KNOW OF THESE PLANS OF YOURS! D8
Don't tell me. I enjoyed that last one.
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Post by Master Splinter on Jun 25, 2011 20:05:53 GMT -5
See this if it confuses you: www.youtube.com/watch?v=qdmuODgxPnU&feature=relatedAs king julien from the madagascar series would say I have gotten an idea inside my brainy parts. Since I am a fan of Esme/Facilier what if this video was a fic so that's what I decided. I wanted to write a fic based on that clip^. So here it is... What if Facilier was NOT famous but instead was legendary and what if he decided to kidnap women by luring them with his new pawn Esmeralda? This is what would happen. Chapter one is how esme meets our lovely bad guy. Excuse the lame title XC ============================== The Shadowman's Pawn Chapter one Esmeralda was simply dancing on the streets as usual to get herself food and supplies to live. She successfully got some golden coins and a lot of men whistling for her attention. What could she say? She was pretty. With green eyes, a pearshaped body, luscious black hair and lovely lips how could she not get attention. This body of hers along with her dancing could take anyones breath away. Little did she know someone very dark DID get their breath taken away. The legendary Dr. Facilier himself he was away from the crowd and just at a alley but his face was filled with shock and amazement to the beautiful woman's dancing and the woman herself. Stepping out of the shadows enough for esmeralda to glance only half of his body but entirely his face esmeralda just stopped for a moment to look at him. While Facilier just winked and gave a tip of his hat in the alley at the lady esme responded with a twirl of her tamborine and a flirty smile. Suddenly their staring contest was faultered by a boy's whistle and esme took that warning too late two guards came and one jokingly asked "Hey pretty lady wanna dance at my house?" Esme responded with a growl "Go to hell. I work here only for money" The second guard laughed "Oh a fiesty one you are I like fiesty" Esme turned to walk but one of the guards grabbed her arm and proceeded to drag her then a cane was between the two people and Dr. Facilier was no longer smiling but frowning in unamusement and said lowly "I suggest y'all go to a bar if you're interested to gettin' a chick now scram" The two guards didn't need to be told again as they ran fast and quite frankly cowardlike. Esmeralda turned to facilier who turned to her with a smirk of triumph "What a bunch of pervs huh?" Esme stood up and said nothing getting ready to run but facilier put his hand up in a way that meant to wait "Whoa! No need to run! I just saved your life well actually I saved your innocence but either way I saved ya" Esme didn't run but gave a look of distrust "Who are you exactly? What do you want? You're the shadowman aren't you" Facilier tipped his hat "That's Dr. Facilier to you darlin' how y'all doin?" Esme said snarky to the man in front of her "I nearly got assaulted. I can't get enough money. I have no home. How do you THINK I'm doing?!" Dr. Facilier simply reacted to her attitude with a smug grin and a chuckle "My my what a fiesty temper. Besides I already know about you having no home.... I can change that" Esmeralda's reaction was a frown of annoyance but curiousity "OK I'll bite. You really think you can help me?" Facilier chuckled and turned his head in a way that meant to be followed and so esmeralda did follow him and the two went inside the emporium to which Facilier was said to work in. Facilier got two glasses and asked "Wine?" Esme shrugged "Sure why not?" Then two purple liquid covered glasses were present on the table and as esme drank facilier spoke "Y'all are one good dancer chere. I would like to make a deal with you" Esme stopped drinking and asked with edge in her voice "What kind of deal?" Facilier put his left hand on his left side of his face and spoke casually "Simply this we have somethin' in common. Y'all want money I want to be rid of a debt but to do so I gotta have souls" Esmeralda was off edge but kept her ground and she was listening as he spoke "So chere I thought of this you clearly can charm anybody with that lovely dancin' so I was thinkin' you could charm any young woman in here so I can make deals with them and get their souls to the other side. What do you say?" Esmeralda then saw a purplepapered contract and facilier grabbed out a pen and gave it to esme "C'mon girl it's a once in a lifetime opportunity" Esmeralda just gave a smirk then signed the contract "Sure I suppose money's no object though right?" Facilier just laughed "Of course chere... of course money ain't no object"
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Post by Master Splinter on Jun 25, 2011 20:39:29 GMT -5
Chapter two and guess what the shadowman gets his revenge on tian--*shot* Nah just kidding they never really meet face to face until the deal in this fic but tiana does get her head on a silver platter. Enjoy! ======= The Shadowman's Pawn Chapter two
Dr. Facilier saw a carnival come to pass so he thought this would be the perfect time for a test drive to his plan. So he got his powder and yelled in his showman voice "Ladies and gentlemen! Do I gotta treat for you! Presenting the lovely esmeralda herself and her wonderful dance recital!" With a blow of powder he was gone and esme was now on the stage while facilier snuck from the crowd to a seat of the show not far by. Esme just simply twirled around and many men shouted in pleasure and many women just wowed. One of those young women was a black girl. Her name was Tiana and she was simply enjoying the day and only today so she could get her head for the restaurant she was always after. Little did she know she would get what she wanted but lose something very important in return. Her life.
As Tiana marveled Esme simply jumped out of the stage and purposely flirted with facilier ending up having a peck on the cheek to which he smugly smirked in response. Then after sometime the dance was over and both facilier and esme left. Tiana feeling ever so curious followed esme to ask how her skills were done. Tiana was heard shouting "Wait! Stop! Miss, I wanna talk about your dancing!" Then she ended up in Facilier's emporium and tiana nervously looked around to find esme since a slam on the door was made. Tiana then gasped as a white dress was replaced with her normal yellow attire and a scenery of her dreamed restaurant was seen in front of her. Tiana for sure looked and acted amazed in fact she was amazed. It was her dream. Little did she know that it was. A smooth deep voice blocked her thoughts "Like what you see darlin' shame y'all gotta work for it so hard"
Tiana spoke only one word in shock "Shadowman!" Facilier in fact was there and he sipped a glass of champange before going over to the girl. He spoke with the calm and tempting tone of voice "You really seem like a hard worker but it just never gets in your hands does it? 'More and more money' they say, 'need more requirements' they say, they need just more in general! NEVER gettin' it!" Tiana simply listened to his words in fact they sounded just like her inner thoughts so tiana started to believe the conman. Facilier came closer to her face and whispered "I can give you it tiana. Just simply say yes and I'll give you what you want. You want that restaurant don't you? Say yes and it can happen in a blink" Tiana looked to the man who held out his hand to shake and tiana somewhat relunctintely shook his hand.
Suddenly esme came and held tiana behind her back and tiana now exclaimed "Hey! What are you both doing?! We had a deal!" Facilier got a amulet out from a huge mask and colors everywhere showed and facilier shouted out "You're right! We did make a deal! You got what you wanted but you'll have to get it in hell!" Without warning esme let go of her and tiana ended up getting a huge knick on her forefinger and it made her heart get weaker and it made her fall down..... Dead. With a boom the mask took tiana and she was no more. She got what she wanted but lost what she already had. Which was her entire being.
Facilier twirled out of the now fallen down curtain and just laughed evily "That was perfect esmeralda! That girl is now in the friends custody! This plan was a huge success! You my girl were perfect!" Esmeralda felt more powerful as well and clearly showed it with her smirk and she replied to the excited conman "She's no problem. Piece of cake" She looked at the curtain as the man walked away and she spoke smugly "I could get used to this"
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Post by Master Splinter on Jun 26, 2011 8:29:54 GMT -5
Both development in the relationship and suspense for another example of a girl which is none other than Meg from hercules ============== The Shadowman's Pawn Chapter three
It has been a few months now and esmeralda was responsible for helping Facilier successfully kill countless women. Tiana was only the first to this horrible genocide attack. Did esmeralda care? A little but only a little what SHE cared about now was Facilier himself. Through the few months she quickly gotten attracted to him and viseversa. Esme for countless minutes privately flirted to facilier with dancing and winks and hugs and even pecks on the cheek. Facilier loved the constant flirting and gave what esme wanted. His attention. He focused on her and flirted back with words of smooth persuasion and even kisses on the cheek back. They both were quite very likeable to one another. Esmeralda could not get the man out of her head and she didn't want to and if she did she felt depressed and tried to get a face image of him. Facilier and esmeralda were so close they even made out on the lips instead of simple pecks on the cheek not once but plenty more times. They were truly a dark couple.
One day just like the rest of them facilier annouced esmeralda's show. When she came up like normal she attracted many people. Meg was one of those girls. Meg was a simple sarcastic woman who just wanted at least no more constant boredom of life. She wanted a change. She would receive that but not the way she had in mind. Esme danced and facilier watched as he glanced that meg was the one who seemed to be most attracted. Facilier and esme made glances at the oblivious meg and both looked at each other with a grin. Meg was now their target. Esmeralda danced near meg and facilier left the crowd to get ready for the two to arrive. Esme said to the girl "Come on stage... wanna little fun?" Meg nodded and replied "Do I? Let's go!" Meg then grabbed esme's hand and the both of them disappeared with a simple twirl of the huge red curtain.
When they arrived meg was now confused. Where was the adventure? It was just a dark alley away from the town. Esmeralda shouted "Surprise!" Meg now a little more confused asked "Surprise? Surprise what? Theirs noone here except you and me" "And me actually" Facilier's voice came and in front of meg was in fact facilier glaring at her as if he was angry with her and he only looked like this to itimitate meg. After all meg DID want adventure so he needed to play the enemy. Meg couldn't help but in fact feel frightened "I did want adventure but not like that not with you glaring at me" Facilier just said nothing and got out a poisonous powder and blew it right in the girl's face. Meg groaned and coughed as the powder began it's work and slowly but surely meg began to die. After a minute it was too late.... Meg followed Tiana's example.
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